Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

by **Red-X** Thu May 05, 2011 10:20 am

and thnx for the freedom Very Happy

by **Red-X** Fri May 06, 2011 10:13 am

I can probably write a part about the plan in more detail? Just to get an idea what our characters are truely in for since, my character has combat/naval experience he can help coordinate

by **Aardvark** Fri May 06, 2011 5:23 pm

Feel free.

by **Red-X** Sat May 07, 2011 12:44 am

by **Red-X** Sun May 08, 2011 6:11 am

posted

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun May 15, 2011 4:49 pm

WELL, what next?

by **Red-X** Sun May 15, 2011 7:54 pm

<_< you wanna write the next section?

by **Ptolemy** Mon May 16, 2011 1:11 am

i am working on a piece in ToP right now. DoaJ will be next.

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 3:40 am

I'll probably put something up about practicing for entry, probably a good time to bring back Force Phasing.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 4:09 am

more gay powers.

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 4:12 am

Already used it once, and story calls for stealth.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 10:17 am

gay powers.

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 6:37 pm

Go play with your wind sword.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 7:09 pm

oh im sorry for picking up a weapon that actually covers me in the blood of my enemies and makes them fall in pain from the wounds and blasts i cause them. yeah, making surgery and mercy kills on them with a fuckin light sword, wich does almost no pain, and wich has a rainbow of colors to choose from like youre in a fucking shopping spree at th mall, is much more manly......

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 7:10 pm

Yeah it was the anime wind blast FROM the sword you made that was gay, not the sword.

by **Ptolemy** Mon May 16, 2011 7:17 pm

??realy??

It is, after all, a star wars fan fiction.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 7:18 pm

well, we make wind blasts with our hands, what with the force pushes. figured it would be pretty obvious to use it with the blade. also, i dont see animes. anime isnt the source of evth you see aard. its pretty much the copier, instead of the copiee, many times.

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 7:31 pm

No that was straight out of every other anime I've seen and it doesn't actually make sense to use it with a sword, just boomerang the thing. I accepted it because I had essentially had Serv use demon goop, but it's getting a little annoying to keep hearing gay every time I write something.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 7:46 pm

but it is gay. your future walking is gay as well. slashing a man into tiny pieces isnt gay. unless you get a hard on with it.............why doesnt it make sense with a sword? im holding the sword with my hands, im swinging it, why lose grip just to cast push with my hand? might as well slash AND push at the same time. efficient. and mighty. besides, i did that like once. or twice. mostly just use the sword to augment my own power.

by **Red-X** Mon May 16, 2011 8:17 pm

'coordination' =___=

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 8:22 pm

by **Ptolemy** Mon May 16, 2011 8:38 pm

discussion

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 8:48 pm

im just waitin here.

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 9:23 pm

It's not future walking, it's past walking, and I used it as an augmented Force Vision. Your little sword thing is basically an anime move in disguise. How about this? Just cut them if you're already swinging in that direction. You don't see Jedi using this gay ass push from their lightsabers and you already said it was the same weight. Back-off my fucking Force use, it's fan fiction, I use it like this because it's faster then coming up with something else, and for so long it was like I was the only person willing to move the story more then an inch. I'm very glad Red is writing now, because he does move it without me having to sit down and discuss it for days to get you or Pto to move. You guys finally started moving it along in DoaJ, but after two whole series like that I got used to having to invent my way quickly through the story.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 9:53 pm

its the equivalent to the difference between a light hitter and a heavy hitter. if your hits are more powerful and heavier, youll wear dwn your opponent easily. if you can add this power without the constraint of slowing down or tiring yourself, wich is what the force helps in, then its a badass useful thing to do.

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