Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:40 pm

the daedalus doesnt land....not with that size.

by **Red-X** Sun Oct 02, 2011 2:50 pm

Dray The Fingerless wrote:the daedalus doesnt land....not with that size.

Was kinda hinting at something ;)

by **Aardvark** Mon Oct 03, 2011 3:22 am

Sarus will leave off with him getting back his equipment and disabling the chip after an introspective decision. Ara will be a couple short segments speeding through the remainder of his decision to go back to the dark side and will have to rely heavily on what was left out meaning I'll actually going a bit back in time to show what was happening to Ara while he was separated from Sarus. I'll probably finish with a communication and planning between Thing and the JvS Temple for the attack.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:46 pm

I need Thing on my ship, and on my assault team. teams will be me and ptolemy, and thing red and the commandos. in the ship plots can weave and joint together. obviously, me and ptolemy are the distraction and the badassery events, while the others will just be all splinter cell. remember not to put too many force users on that ship....they would obliterate the commandos. and red.

by **Red-X** Mon Oct 17, 2011 11:29 pm

by **Dray The Fingerless** Wed Oct 19, 2011 6:54 pm

nerdmaaaan

by **Ptolemy** Wed Oct 19, 2011 7:53 pm

by **Aardvark** Thu Oct 20, 2011 1:11 am

It's coming along.

by **Red-X** Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:03 pm

The thought having an erotic moment soo crossed my mind...but we wwaayy past that opportunity :\

by **Ptolemy** Sat Oct 29, 2011 2:18 am

oooo last minute betrayal

by **Red-X** Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:26 am

massive sacrifice

by **Dray The Fingerless** Fri Nov 04, 2011 9:23 am

you sound like the type of person who would masturbate to hutts red....

by **soran** Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:14 am

Dray The Fingerless wrote:you sound like the type of person who would masturbate to hutts red....

by **Red-X** Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:32 pm

I wanna leave Yavin scarred, like kashyyyk

btw, do you need a hand aard?

by **Aardvark** Wed Nov 09, 2011 5:27 am

Didn't have the time to put the touches on I wanted and the most of the last two areas are a rush job. So as you can guess by reading Sarus has a weird approach to the dark side, he is essentially trapped inside his own body and I did this because this is less a temptation for him as a necessity. Anyway it might make for an interesting fist fight if they encounter him in that state. I had a hard time giving Aragorn more reasons to turn so most of this focuses on Sarus while I leave Aragorn's character to more implied self-reflection. Aragorn's reason for accepting Dusk's offer is to stab him in the back and end the war earlier, or at least that's what I'm implying, if you want to change the reason I think I left it open enough for just about anything.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:20 am

you emo pricks.

by **Red-X** Wed Nov 09, 2011 12:37 pm

Oh damn, this shit just got real

i'll start later today. Gonna have a nice reunion Razz

by **Aardvark** Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:50 pm

I do recall telling you this would be a rush job Dray. I had originally planned for this to take place over weeks which would have given me an opportunity to explore all the connections and give a more realistic, non-emo turn for Aragorn and less intensive self-reflection for Sarus. But I got like a day for the characters to come to whatever decision they needed so yeah it was gonna be really emo no matter how I went at it.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:14 pm

its funy how they always capture the mentally fragile characters in star wars....ITS ALMOST LIKE THEY WRITE IT FOR DRAMA SAKE.

i recmmend red making myself and ptolemy the distraction, and you and thing the strike team.

by **Ptolemy** Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:10 pm

Ptolemy needs to face Ara if the fall is complete.

by **Aardvark** Wed Nov 09, 2011 11:53 pm

Would be better for none of the team to know Ara has fallen for a while. Sarus has had no contact, and the way the writing is setup Ara will be off the ship before the team comes aboard and before Sarus can get to him. In this case the team would most likely assume Aragorn's been transferred, not turned. Any confrontation should happen in the middle of the fight down on the planet.

Now who all is going to be on the planet? Are we going to say the Council moved there or is this just another outpost? Because last time we cited Yavin for anything it was a trap that backfired and ended up overrun with Crusaders.

by **Red-X** Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:01 am

Aardvark wrote:Would be better for none of the team to know Ara has fallen for a while. Sarus has had no contact, and the way the writing is setup Ara will be off the ship before the team comes aboard and before Sarus can get to him. In this case the team would most likely assume Aragorn's been transferred, not turned. Any confrontation should happen in the middle of the fight down on the planet.

Now who all is going to be on the planet? Are we going to say the Council moved there or is this just another outpost? Because last time we cited Yavin for anything it was a trap that backfired and ended up overrun with Crusaders.

Wait, wait. Yavin is already over run with crusaders? No one is from JSA is there? If there isnt, then alittle set piece I had in mind just went out the window. I am taking all these ideas you, dray and pto are talking about, but i'm adding a very neat twist. If I can pull it off :\

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:04 am

Dantooine aard....dantooine....not yavin. yavin is fine.

by **Red-X** Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:06 am

Oh thank god

by **Ptolemy** Thu Nov 10, 2011 2:44 am

I didn't think it was Yavin. I thought that Yavin was where JvS was at first but i was set straight for that.

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