Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

by **Aardvark** Mon May 16, 2011 10:06 pm

And if I can make an involved story mechanic using the Force, or speed up a lengthy exposition with established techniques then it's useful.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon May 16, 2011 10:19 pm

ITSSSSS STILLLLLL GAYYYYYYYY THOUUUU. gays can be useful too dont worry. Razz

by **Thing** Tue May 17, 2011 5:05 am

^ Prime example.

by **Aardvark** Tue May 17, 2011 5:24 am

Yeah he was pretty useful as SR.

by **Thing** Tue May 17, 2011 11:19 am

All whilst being oneuh them "gays."

by **Dray The Fingerless** Tue May 17, 2011 12:31 pm

HAR HAR HAR HAR HAR. i sense jealousy thing.

by **Thing** Tue May 17, 2011 9:26 pm

Hah, don't flatter yourself Cool

by **Ptolemy** Fri May 27, 2011 7:31 pm

OK i have posted. I do hope i have moved the story along...

by **Dray The Fingerless** Fri May 27, 2011 11:23 pm

Not sure i agree with some of those things...but oh well.

by **Ptolemy** Sat May 28, 2011 3:20 am

well it cannot all be easy for the jedi, if they are in the dire straights we have written then there should be another actual intelligence. Aard had already hinted at a change of mission for the crusaders in the first part of the story when they held half the galaxy and commerce and life was getting back to normal.

It could not happen that way if they were still in this just to destroy.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sat May 28, 2011 10:53 am

no that was already written before. not that part. mainly, how Dusk becomes basically generic Sith Dark Lord number 300200, my fight with jax becomes pointless(even thou me and my team are basically the most advanced and intelligent team in the Alliance, we kinda missed that Jax was cloned) Aras reason to falling...but i can work with that on my next post, Coruscants fall, and sth else but i forgot now.

EDIT: oh, indocrination. Yeah, Dusk cant indocrinate anyone anymore. I destroyed the MacGuffin that allowed that.

by **Aardvark** Sat May 28, 2011 11:07 am

Yeah I'm gonna have to go ahead and say the entire section needs to be striked. Project Daedalus actually is what Kael had planned, the destruction had a purpose, the means to indoctrinate has been destroyed, and the goal is not controlling the Galaxy. The entire thing is a bit more complicated than that.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sat May 28, 2011 11:26 am

Im just gona say this once Aard. If you are trying to pull a Kreia here....god have mercy on you.

by **Aardvark** Sat May 28, 2011 12:05 pm

No, not Kreia, different thing, same crazy though.

by **Red-X** Sat May 28, 2011 1:23 pm

sooo delete pto's post i guess? Should he rewrite it?

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sat May 28, 2011 1:36 pm

granted if he has it saved. that way if he wants to rewrite sth he can do it. better wait till he says he has it thou.

by **Aardvark** Sat May 28, 2011 1:37 pm

Rewrite would be preferable, Dusk should be brought up every once in a while to keep his side of the conflict. Just make his ideals vague, I can tell you there is a reason the Crusader side isn't destroying the infrastructure they come across and are instead occupying the territory, but I'm afraid if I explain why then everyone's writing will become transparent.

by **Red-X** Sat May 28, 2011 1:41 pm

well the one thing i liked was the 'trap' on muunilisnt, that could make things interesting and probably most likely to happen anyways

by **Aardvark** Sat May 28, 2011 1:51 pm

Within limits, it shouldn't result in a route, but yes any installation that large it's a fairly safe bet for Dusk to guess who's going to attack given the history in the series though some things will be unknowable. Pto hasn't been in enough conflict to be verified and Sarus was basically absent from the war until very recently, Red and the Stinger are also unknowns, so if a trap is planned they shouldn't figure in everyone on the team.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sat May 28, 2011 2:30 pm

Well im loud so hes prolly counting on me. and my sword. no matter. Ill just have sarus disable traps and pick locks while i aggro all the fuckers.

by **Aardvark** Sat May 28, 2011 2:38 pm

Dray and Ara have been front line fighters and Thing's a top tier General so they'll be expected, and you'll find it hard to have Sarus pick locks since he's on a solo mission.

by **Ptolemy** Sat May 28, 2011 4:23 pm

See this is why i do not do anything major till i talk to you. I have a good idea to spur some creativity and it gets shot down...

Delete the post i will dumb it down.

by **Aardvark** Sat May 28, 2011 4:31 pm

You could just shoot me a PM about where you're about to take it if you plan on a major plot decision.

by **Ptolemy** Sat May 28, 2011 6:48 pm

Didn't think i was, I thought i was expounding on a plot line that opened the current story line. True the jax 'clone' was almost an afterthought (A brilliant one i might add) the rest i did not see as ground breaking.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sat May 28, 2011 6:55 pm

Aardvark wrote:You could just shoot me

That works too.

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