Re: Coaj Coordination Thread

by **Aardvark** Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:15 pm

Dray, Dusk still has to be able to control them. Doing control on such a massive scale would require assistance otherwise he would have to be in meditation 24 hours a day. Besides, this means that he can't recruit MORE people just control the ones he still has.

by **Ptolemy** Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:33 pm

meh if i understand the explanation he could still recruit, just not on the scale the other guy did

by **Aardvark** Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:43 pm

Well he'd have to break them down himself, in person which means it would be insanely slow to recruit more Crusaders. What the development I made does is limit the Crusaders, but also makes them a much tougher opponent.

If you guys don't like it then I'll figure something else out.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Wed Apr 28, 2010 6:50 pm

im just gonna cut off his arms ok?

by **Aardvark** Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:00 pm

*Rolls up paper and hits Dray* Bad! That's for the finale in DoaJ.

by **Ptolemy** Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:27 pm

I have no problem either way.

by **Aardvark** Fri Apr 30, 2010 6:59 pm

Anyway Dray, you didn't give me much choice, and I couldn't exactly figure out what you were going to do about the amulet until you wrote it so I couldn't include the hints in previous posts without knowing if I'd need to cash that in. I can reedit the posts now to reflect that he had indeed found something of interest while looking through the database and had located them while looking for Jax. Why do you think I wrote that the droid was in a warehouse instead of somewhere more suitable like a restraining bolt or a scrap heap? I wanted to be able to include things afterwards about finding the object's locations.

Anyway, Pto's a little busy this week but he is up next so give him some time Xzav, then we can coordinate the final segment for CoaJ.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Fri Apr 30, 2010 7:04 pm

eh i dont mind, just this whole Sith Alchemy is not my fav part. want sum more pew pew factor in the final chapter.

by **tRibaL** Fri Apr 30, 2010 7:28 pm

Im patiant as all get out, i need to talk to aard and pt at the same time, (or just aard for now) bout ToP soon as possible.

by **Aardvark** Fri Apr 30, 2010 8:13 pm

There should be once Pto and Xzav get theirs in. I'll probably write up a base line final sequence that gives us a big explosion and a trailer that will be included with Xzav's last post.

by **tRibaL** Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:29 pm

yea... can i blow up tatooine? please Smile

?

by **Aardvark** Fri Apr 30, 2010 10:43 pm

Dude, that's like killing Luke or calling Vader a sissy. You just don't do it....

by **tRibaL** Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:02 pm

fyi, that was a joke.... and i found it funny, Smile

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun May 09, 2010 12:14 pm

so, anyone? xzav? if kami doesnt want to, i can write final segment as well.

by **tRibaL** Sun May 09, 2010 2:27 pm

I still need to tie up my post in the final segment, and i was planning on coordinating it with aard..

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun May 09, 2010 2:43 pm

your in tatooine, lol, i dont think you can connect one to another.

by **Aardvark** Sun May 09, 2010 7:37 pm

Pto is writing, he had business to attend to up until Friday. Xzav will be writing the final part after Pto writes his with my input for the last scene to finish out CoaJ.

by **Thing** Sun May 09, 2010 8:48 pm

Finally.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun May 09, 2010 9:00 pm

no really, its like 2 paragraphs to end this.

watch:

baz: hes gotten away, we wil lcatch him later...
--------
dray OH NOES, MORE ENEMIEZ!
sarus: OH NOES, ARA IS FACEPALMING AGAIN!
ara: facepalming
ptolemy: im ooold and im limpy, but im gonna make it.
dray: swoooosh.
sarus: swoooosh
dray. they r gone, to my ship!
sarus: pick up the others!
dray: done!
ara: moer facepalming
thing: bawwwww, i want dawwwwn!
dray:dun worry, we will
EXPLOSIOOOOON! BUNCH OF CULTISTS DIIIIE
chikita is damaged by the explosion and is taken in by the cruisers
dray: i r the best
sarus: around!
dray:no ones ever gonna keep me down!
ara:facepalms himself to death and everyone lives happily ever after
--------
dusk: muahahaha, i am not dead yet fools *cuts himself like an emo*
droid: master master master master master
dusk: ill get you next time gadget, NEXT TIME!
droid: MIAWUUUUU!

THE END

by **Thing** Mon May 10, 2010 12:28 am

Bitch, you crazy.

by **Ptolemy** Mon May 10, 2010 5:40 am

Dray The Fingerless wrote:no really, its like 2 paragraphs to end this.

watch:

baz: hes gotten away, we wil lcatch him later...
--------
dray OH NOES, MORE ENEMIEZ!
sarus: OH NOES, ARA IS FACEPALMING AGAIN!
ara: facepalming
ptolemy: im ooold and im limpy, but im gonna make it.
dray: swoooosh.
sarus: swoooosh
dray. they r gone, to my ship!
sarus: pick up the others!
dray: done!
ara: moer facepalming
thing: bawwwww, i want dawwwwn!
dray:dun worry, we will
EXPLOSIOOOOON! BUNCH OF CULTISTS DIIIIE
chikita is damaged by the explosion and is taken in by the cruisers
dray: i r the best
sarus: around!
dray:no ones ever gonna keep me down!
ara:facepalms himself to death and everyone lives happily ever after
--------
dusk: muahahaha, i am not dead yet fools *cuts himself like an emo*
droid: master master master master master
dusk: ill get you next time gadget, NEXT TIME!
droid: MIAWUUUUU!

THE END

Thanks for the template Dray!

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by **tRibaL** Mon May 10, 2010 7:34 pm

Wait, you killed Red and Seto? Nowhay, they feigned death and will pop up in the food compartment shoveling food down there throats.

by **Aardvark** Mon May 10, 2010 7:41 pm

No we killed Tiw and Darke.

by **tRibaL** Mon May 10, 2010 7:43 pm

Oh, then you should probably remember that Red and Seto still need to be back on the ship, i think it would best serve as if they forgot about them, then turn around and they are there.

by **Ptolemy** Mon May 10, 2010 7:44 pm

no Ninja were harmed in the writing of this story...

'the other groups were picked up

It is implied i can edit if needed tho

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