Re: Coaj Coordination Thread

[Ptolemy]

I wouldn't think it would take to long between. ow long would it take for dawn/dusk to consolidate and move on?

[Aardvark]

The point of DoaJ is to be a lot like the opening of RotS. In reality, a war takes years and years to fight, we've started this war in CoaJ, and going through the entire thing would take a shit load of writing. The point of accelerating the time to a year after is to give enough time for us to just write the final events of the war.

[Thing]

Who else dies during that year?

[Aardvark]

Fodder?

[Dray The Fingerless]

Wtf dude, its not that big of a war...Like make it start as a diplomatic mission, joining various academies in a meeting to fight the remnants of Crusaders. I dont think there is much left of Crusaders.

[Ptolemy]

well we only engaged 1 base and it was alluded that it was not the main or even a large base.

and even if they are not big in numbers, they are more formidable now than they were before.

[Thing]

THAT'S KA-BLAMO!

[Aardvark]

It IS a big war Dray, that wasn't a home base, just a large outpost.

[Ptolemy]

Bump!

[Aardvark]

If I get done writing my intro for DoaJ and the end of CoaJ isn't done then I may just write the final myself.

[Dr. Patient]

...... what is this???????????

[Aardvark]

It's a coordination thread for the story called "Corruption of a Jedi".

[Ptolemy]

If you look at my sig you will see links to it and another story we are collaborating on.

[tRibaL]

I just finished finals. SCHOOLS OUT!!!!!! so yea, i can get started on my final post. Ill prolly have it done by sundayish(or monday)

[Ptolemy]

BUMP!

[Aardvark]

Well I'm almost done with my 10ish DoaJ segment, so I may end up taking a crack at it first.

[tRibaL]

Ok, again, aard i have no problem with oyu finishing it, but ima need to send you my end of my segment, im busy irl atm and cant really write untill after my bros grad party.

[Ptolemy]

so the next one is Death of a Jedi not Redemption of a Jedi?

[Aardvark]

We keep debating it, but titling it Redemption of a Jedi would kind of ruin the ending for people who may read it and are not involved in the writing. Death of a Jedi is more vague, because there are a lot of Jedi main characters, where as there's only one main character that's the bad guy.

[Dray The Fingerless]

We keep debating it, but titling it Redemption of a Jedi would kind of ruin the ending for people who may read it and are not involved in the writing. Death of a Jedi is more vague, because there are a lot of Jedi main characters, where as there's only one main character that's the bad guy.

Didnt say whos redemption it was. Also, try making initial segments shorter, so we have less rules to stick with.

[Aardvark]

There's only one person we could possibly Redeem. The main chars are: Aragorn, Dawn/Dusk, Dray, Ptolemy, Sarus & Thing. Prominent Secondary chars are: Champ, Iron, Lay, Span, & Xzavier. Less Prominent Secondary chars: Ninjas, DAJ Council, JvS Council, Bazariel, Galerm, Lehel, & Peppa.

Of those chars there are only two you could redeem: Dawn/Dusk & Lehel(and he's never going to be more then a toady).

And what do you mean less rules to follow? I told you guys that Sarus' initial segment is completely solo from any Main or Secondary characters.

[Thing]

I like the alphabetical order of the primary and prominent secondary characters and how you just didn't give a shit on the rest.

[tRibaL]

see thing, i woulda never noticed that if you diddnt point it out (thats serious)

[Aardvark]

Their all in alphabetical order, but when listing more then one person I go by group density. There's more Ninjas then DAJ and JvS Councilors, then you get to the single people.

[Dray The Fingerless]

See that is why you need shrinks Aard.

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