Re: Coaj Coordination Thread

by **Dray The Fingerless** Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:57 pm

NOU

and its coming along slowly

by **Aardvark** Fri Dec 18, 2009 10:07 pm

Now I know what it feels like when you guys are waiting on me.

by **Thing** Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:06 am

Yeah, it's sucks shit...

by **Aardvark** Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:13 am

I know what you mean. My fight sequence finger is twitching.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:34 pm

i have a finger twitching too...wait for it....wait for it....

Coaj Coordination Thread - Page 13 Middle-finger

by **Thing** Sat Dec 19, 2009 3:26 pm

Lulz.

by **Nomad** Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:30 pm

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:37 pm

i think its done...i forgot where i was supposed to stop lol.

by **Aardvark** Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:56 pm

Umm don't take us off planet, and leave the whole of the battle scenario unfinished. That's pretty much it as far as I'm concerned.

by **Jacen** Sun Dec 20, 2009 9:57 pm

Can I just show up and save all ur asses from certain death?

lol, jk

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:11 pm

Aardvark wrote:Umm don't take us off planet, and leave the whole of the battle scenario unfinished. That's pretty much it as far as I'm concerned.

i havent taken us off planet. we just landed, and we are about to fight.

by **Aardvark** Sun Dec 20, 2009 10:41 pm

Sounds good.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:27 pm

Posted.

by **Ptolemy** Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:52 am

verry good...

by **Dawn_Twilight** Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:42 am

Okay so I'll eventualy post something bout Dusk

but make sure Dusk kills off The Dark One....

wait when ARE we killing the "DARK ONE"off o_O

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:00 am

Dusk doesn't kill him, Dray does.

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:26 am

And nice section Dray. Very well written.

by **Thing** Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:19 am

Nice writing there Dray but, FFS, get it right. I'm not a sma knight... I'm supposed to be 17. Second, we already knew Dawn was captured via Pt's head message.

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:25 am

Sarus: 24
Aragorn: 20
Ptolemy: 40+
Dray: 20+
Thing: 17

Sorry thing you're still the youngest character in the group.

by **Dawn_Twilight** Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:38 am

kk Dray Kills him ---> Dusk takes over? wasn't that sometng you wanted to do

god IE sucks for typing =(!

Anywho, any ideas for Dusk's trainings?

can he have a uber force move?

Was thinking of Adding a Internal Conflict between Dawn and Dusk if that is okay.

by **Thing** Mon Dec 21, 2009 5:44 am

Aardvark wrote:Sarus: 24
Aragorn: 20
Ptolemy: 40+
Dray: 20+
Thing: 17

Sorry thing you're still the youngest character in the group.

Yeah, youngest, not smallest. Smallest makes me sound like. 10 year old.

@Dawn I really don't think you should do another über force move. It would seem overdone. But an internal conflict is always interesting.

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:50 am

Well I did think of a Force move a few years ago that's not uber but is exotic and dark sidey. Basically the idea is that it overloads the nerve endings on a body part, causing anything from excruciating pain, to paralysis in the area effected. It manifests like a Force Lightning but isn't as wide spread, extremely confined, meaning you could torture someone by hitting arms and legs, or kill someone by hitting their heart.

Your choice.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon Dec 21, 2009 11:29 am

its a directed force lightning, focusing the charge thru certain key points in the body that contain highly sensitive to pain nerves. or u can focus it in the heart, and cause a heart attack.

Thing, you are smaller then me, and i am older then Sarus i believe, like 24-28.

Kami was like...30 sth.

Dawn, a intra discussion between the two would be really interesting now. You do that, dont be too hasty writting it, take ur time.

Im still gonna write a fighting sequence, but ill let Kami have some fun first. You can even make some parts for me to segway in.

by **Dawn_Twilight** Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:17 pm

Dray The Fingerless wrote:its a directed force lightning, focusing the charge thru certain key points in the body that contain highly sensitive to pain nerves. or u can focus it in the heart, and cause a heart attack.

Thing, you are smaller then me, and i am older then Sarus i believe, like 24-28.

Kami was like...30 sth.

Dawn, a intra discussion between the two would be really interesting now. You do that, dont be too hasty writting it, take ur time.

Im still gonna write a fighting sequence, but ill let Kami have some fun first. You can even make some parts for me to segway in.

Yeah was planning something like that...

Hmmm anyone want to help me a bit with it?

by **Thing** Mon Dec 21, 2009 9:30 pm

Could you at least edit your story so our stories don't clash.

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