Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

by **Red-X** Sat Jul 09, 2011 3:22 pm

Aardvark wrote:

Oh and should I take them into the base or actually destroy the shield because that decides between 4-6 pages and 10-12.

totally up to you, if you're going the "reach" route. Shit can turn abruptly in that situation lol

Just like Kat... :\\\

by **Aardvark** Sat Jul 09, 2011 6:47 pm

No Dray our side has lost, but not this particular group of people.

by **Ptolemy** Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:11 pm

I would say get into the base and barely get out...?

by **Red-X** Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:35 pm

Ptolemy wrote:I would say get into the base and barely get out...?

that could fall under still winning. We've had many near death experiences and still won lol

by **Ptolemy** Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:41 pm

With out accomplishing the mission? I dunno.

by **Red-X** Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:43 pm

now that could work :o, aards gonna have to come up with consequences

by **Aardvark** Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:38 pm

Get on X-fire and I'll explain what I was thinking of.

by **Red-X** Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:44 pm

cant, away from home

by **Ptolemy** Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:44 pm

i am on Xfire

by **Aardvark** Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:38 am

Just got them to the entrance and it's 8 pages.... so yeah. I won't lie, there are a lot of spastic parts you will find pieces of horrible writing followed quickly by good parts(for me at least). There is a part in there where Ara accidentally attacks Sarus, I can remove that part if it's a problem Pto. The way I have it now is that Ara basically views his slip up as isolated and fixable as this seemed the best way to go about it after his shake-up. I can go back and replace it with a more Jacen-esque way by making him stop quickly without turning and believing nothing bad happened, but it also means Sarus would become suspicious.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon Jul 11, 2011 1:15 pm

oh aard. no. just no.

leave the bad puns to me. you suck at them.

also, whats the rest of us doing?

by **Red-X** Mon Jul 11, 2011 5:22 pm

well damn, that ending actually left me stumped aard lol

by **Ptolemy** Mon Jul 11, 2011 6:42 pm

the attack on Sarus was surprising. i like it but it was suprising.

I am not sure where to go from here either...

by **Aardvark** Mon Jul 11, 2011 7:21 pm

It's a Duke Nukem quote Dray, how good can they be when executed right?

As for where to go, rattle things up. The team was forced to leave without preparation, training, or outfitting in the middle of a battle and an escape they survived by the skin of their teeth. Shit will go wrong, and it will happen at bad times because there's not a good time in this situation. Have the cloak glitch, realize your fuel level is too low and you need to get more, stumble into a dogfight. It doesn't need to be any of the things I listed but you get the idea. Hell you could even do an impromptu humanitarian mission.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:35 pm

Aardvark wrote:It's a Duke Nukem quote Dray, how good can they be when executed right?

As for where to go, rattle things up. The team was forced to leave without preparation, training, or outfitting in the middle of a battle and an escape they survived by the skin of their teeth. Shit will go wrong, and it will happen at bad times because there's not a good time in this situation. Have the cloak glitch, realize your fuel level is too low and you need to get more, stumble into a dogfight. It doesn't need to be any of the things I listed but you get the idea. Hell you could even do an impromptu humanitarian mission.

you leave the puns to me. and no doing duke nukem puns. double parodies suck.

also, WHAT THE FUCK IS THE REST OF US DOING.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:38 pm

WHAT THE FUCK IS THE REST OF US DOING.

by **Red-X** Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:45 pm

^ i think hes asking you aard

by **Ptolemy** Thu Jul 14, 2011 4:38 pm

we are fighting a battle trying to hold long enough to bombard the emplacement.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:13 pm

thats vague. i already knew we were fighting a battle. what are we, just waiting in my ship cruising around shootnig things off the sky?

by **Red-X** Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:17 pm

>__> i could put you off in direction

i did have a small idea for you. can your character pilot a star fighter? Of course there will be more to it, but thats a surprise to what me thinking....if im allowed to right next

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:24 pm

you know my ship isnt supposed to be able to albergate a star fighter harbor. its not that fucking big. also, wouldnt it make sense to make adistraction for the TWO people we sent to invade the HUGE FUCKING GUARDED SUPER IMPORTANT FORTRESS. i dunno, we just gonna let them 2 to deal with all the heat alone?

by **Red-X** Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:26 pm

no no no, not piloting a ship in the shadow, another starfighter from kora's or things fleet

plus, there is alot going outside, so thats kinda already a distraction

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:33 pm

im as good as the Shadow pilots.

by **Ptolemy** Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:32 pm

I do not fly star fighters. I am a good ship pilot i do not do fighters.

by **Aardvark** Thu Jul 14, 2011 6:50 pm

Well there you go Dray, take over piloting the ship and keep the air support off of Sarus and Ara. Pto & Red can do some dramatic shit. Red can run the ground battle, muster what's left of the resistance, and Pto can well be the wise old guy. I don't know, Battle Meditation, Force Visions, or just be a ground rallying point for a convenient group of fighters. I DON'T KNOW. Like I said before I wrote at that point because I thought up some nice plot development for that scenario, I kinda figured Red would pick up and pull something out of his ass to make the other stuff exciting.

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