Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

by **Red-X** Tue Mar 01, 2011 9:58 pm

xzavier wrote:your boi goes at the end of the introductory post of your segment. (first time hes mentioned)

soz for not being perfect?

Aardvark wrote:Nah, just gonna take out one or two of the pirate ships. You said there were fifteen so I should be good to tear a couple apart.

no biggie, thats reasonable. Im sure the shadow can give a good fight lol

by **Aardvark** Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:00 am

Yeah that was probably a piece of shit I just turned out, was much better in my head.

by **Red-X** Thu Mar 03, 2011 2:34 am

felt quick, though i just spotted one small mistake

you could always rewrite this?

by **Aardvark** Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:17 am

Yeah if I have the time I can rewrite, probably won't since I can't think of a way to stretch it that won't take 6+ hours.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Thu Mar 03, 2011 3:22 am

aard this is silly.why didnt you just make my ship go ninja on them?

by **Aardvark** Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:25 am

Because Red had already established that your stealth generator was down and charging. There really wasn't much I could do with the whole thing. Being out-numbered 15 to 1 with a ship that's at best a stealth frigate with teeth and having reinforcements 30 minutes out. The ship wouldn't last half that time so I had to create a scenario where a cease fire would happen.

by **Ptolemy** Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:14 am

I like it but it was rushed. i will get something out in the next day or so. Should be a good read

Aard did you get my IM on Xfire?

by **Aardvark** Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:18 am

Nope.

by **Ptolemy** Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:25 am

huh well now i cannot remember but it was gonna be awesome...

oh well

living ships...

by **Aardvark** Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:36 am

Oh you mean the Zonama Sekot thing, no, that particular part in SW was a... mistake.

by **Red-X** Thu Mar 03, 2011 11:57 am

hey pto, will your story conflict with aards? I'll start writing again if dray doesnt

by **Ptolemy** Thu Mar 03, 2011 1:39 pm

Not realy I have kind of a sub plot going. I have something planned if you can get me oon Xfire i will let you know. Maybe you could work it in some how.

by **Red-X** Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:15 pm

Ptolemy wrote:Not realy I have kind of a sub plot going. I have something planned if you can get me oon Xfire i will let you know. Maybe you could work it in some how.

k i'll be on later today

by **tRibaL** Thu Mar 03, 2011 11:39 pm

ill prolly post something this weekend.

by **tRibaL** Thu Mar 03, 2011 11:39 pm

Red-X wrote:
xzavier wrote:your boi goes at the end of the introductory post of your segment. (first time hes mentioned)

soz for not being perfect?

I didnt mean it that way, sry. I meant like thats where it goes, not like WOW WHAT A COOL KID, LOOK HE DIDDNT DO IT RITE, ROFLOLCOPTAS.

no offense intended in that post bro.

pro double post

by **Red-X** Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:18 pm

by **Ptolemy** Mon Mar 14, 2011 4:20 pm

Posted

by **Red-X** Mon Mar 14, 2011 9:02 pm

very mysterious

well since a week gone by, i'll start off where aard was then flash forward to the 'now'

by **Aardvark** Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:22 pm

You can disregard my post if it helps, or change events and I'll either delete or re-work the events.

by **Red-X** Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:36 pm

i'll look back over it and i'll make my decision tonightz

by **Red-X** Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:39 am

you can delete your post aard, im gonna add some elements you used in the chapter and go from there

by **Aardvark** Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:37 pm

by **Red-X** Wed Mar 16, 2011 2:53 am

;D finished, typing tomorowz

by **Dray The Fingerless** Wed Mar 16, 2011 2:57 am

aard is a faggot.

by **Ptolemy** Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:21 am

And its ok to be ****

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