Coaj Coordination Thread
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Re: Coaj Coordination Thread
No Xzavier, the next time I post is either going to be after the battle is over, or to end the battle. I have a special, but slightly obvious ending for the fight that I just want to write and be done with.
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Re: Coaj Coordination Thread
I thought you would like the multifaceted nature of the modern battle field
Any way Xzav thats fine what i had envisioned is the ninja coming over the wall and taking out crusaders at key points in the battle. It is like the snipers hitting targets of opportunity.
Any way Xzav thats fine what i had envisioned is the ninja coming over the wall and taking out crusaders at key points in the battle. It is like the snipers hitting targets of opportunity.
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I have an idea for how to end the battle. A fully thoughtout idea finally, but I need some setup from you Pto. If you could have, when Champ and Lay finish falling back, that the remaining Crusaders fall off, and then three "mysterious" Crusaders pop in? One in front of champ, lay, and dray, another in front of the "ninjas" and a third in front of Camus and 2-3 other random MC/DC? Would really make writing the end a lot easy if you could work that in at the end.
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Re: Coaj Coordination Thread
The ninja will be making several appearances making a difference and will end up in the hangar. they will actually save Ptolemy's bacon from another crusader that shows right after the force duel when Ptolemy is most vulnerable. so that will work out.
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well, aard, you may use my technique if you think u need it...or you know, just make em kick ass. i already know what your doing motherfucker. lol
EDIT: actually, id like to learn about who were facing, so that i may give/not give you sth for the fight. depends on what it is.
EDIT: actually, id like to learn about who were facing, so that i may give/not give you sth for the fight. depends on what it is.
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wat IS he doing?
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Let the force guide you young padawan
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*meditates*heeeees....eating.......uhm.......his dog? no, hes cheating at cards! nonono, that cant be it...uhm...nvm. I no, hes raping yoda! Dray, that is.
jk
wen will i be intro'd?
jk
wen will i be intro'd?
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i actualy was thinking of using this as a part of the ninjas, i had a few REALLY good ideas, one of which idk if is possible (Jester pulling a sarus with force slam into ground causing small earthquake) ill explain that later: but heres like something i wanted to include:
As Red, Talac and Jester slipped past the main hallways, staying silent against the wall, being the few who still have the ability to move without making a sound. There were Crusaders everywhere, Packing the halls and pouring into the academy, it seems as if it was water rushing into a rock.
Then Talac saw a opportunity of three crusaders that had turned around a corner into a far shorter hallway, He motioned to jester and red to stay there, and withdrew his knife as he silently glided across the floor, then he leaped onto the first crusader instantly slitting his throat before the other two could react. As the first was falling the other two swung out and far at Talac expecting to catch him disarmed, he dropped beneath the two sabers catching the arm of the crusader to his left pulling the swing to a full spin hitting the third crusader across the throat killing him without a sound as he slit the second crusaders throat.
All in about five seconds and without making a sound, Talac new his trade well, and none could make a foe "dissipate" the way he could.
He stashed the bodies in a room on the right then regrouped with red and jester.
This was just my idea for Talacs sweet move, i had a idea for jester but that would make a big boom for a entrance then just disappear...
As Red, Talac and Jester slipped past the main hallways, staying silent against the wall, being the few who still have the ability to move without making a sound. There were Crusaders everywhere, Packing the halls and pouring into the academy, it seems as if it was water rushing into a rock.
Then Talac saw a opportunity of three crusaders that had turned around a corner into a far shorter hallway, He motioned to jester and red to stay there, and withdrew his knife as he silently glided across the floor, then he leaped onto the first crusader instantly slitting his throat before the other two could react. As the first was falling the other two swung out and far at Talac expecting to catch him disarmed, he dropped beneath the two sabers catching the arm of the crusader to his left pulling the swing to a full spin hitting the third crusader across the throat killing him without a sound as he slit the second crusaders throat.
All in about five seconds and without making a sound, Talac new his trade well, and none could make a foe "dissipate" the way he could.
He stashed the bodies in a room on the right then regrouped with red and jester.
This was just my idea for Talacs sweet move, i had a idea for jester but that would make a big boom for a entrance then just disappear...
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Ninjas do not 'boom'
I was hoping for a quiet infiltration over the wall and making your way through the enclave to the the hangar where you see a force duel going on then i can take over...
I was hoping for a quiet infiltration over the wall and making your way through the enclave to the the hangar where you see a force duel going on then i can take over...
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this is a ninja in star wars:
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well commandos more than ninjas
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Ptolemy wrote:well commandos more than ninjas
ninja...
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these are commandos:
THOSE are ninjas
THOSE are ninjas
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i think the jedi do more ninja like things than those clones did in the clip
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hmmm...not really. they dont do much reconnaissance or sneaking.
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OK i have posted as far as i can with out the 'ninja'.
If you want me to write it thats fine but i thought since they are Xzav's...
If you want me to write it thats fine but i thought since they are Xzav's...
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Good post Pto, and Xzav said he'd be posting soon when I talked to him today.
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no, the commandos only shoot stuff. which makes them commandos
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VERY nice section, hopefully ill have my post up by the battle.
i got it about half done right now.
i got it about half done right now.
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posted finally.
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Hope that Force Warrior is just some random one, because Sarus and Gal are walking back to the Garden with Gal unconscious. Currently Spanish and Nel are taking over for them.
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he was talking about ptolemy i think...
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Ah yeah that does make more sense, sorry.
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LOL
ok now i have to figure from there.
Give me a minute...
ok now i have to figure from there.
Give me a minute...
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