Re: Coaj Coordination Thread

by **Ptolemy** Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:32 am

Aardvark wrote:Oi, here's a simple way of putting it. By displayed writing, Pto is closest to the level required to be a professional author, and honestly could probably be one if he decided that's the direction he wanted to go.

Well thanks Aard i appreciate that. if only there were a publisher that shared your sentiments..

by **Ptolemy** Mon Nov 30, 2009 7:29 am

there posted. i am tired now. good night. Not my best work so i will have to edit.

by **Thing** Mon Nov 30, 2009 10:37 pm

Lol, nice.

Great to know I'm a shitty writer! Very Happy

by **Ptolemy** Wed Dec 02, 2009 8:08 pm

ok so i deleted and posted again. this one is much better. rewritten just a bit

by **Dawn_Twilight** Wed Dec 02, 2009 9:32 pm

*pops head in*

o_o please tell me theres not like 2 pages for me to read xD

yes I'm alive o.o I just can't get on the damn computer often >_<

by Nihil Wed Dec 02, 2009 10:27 pm

OMG!!

^alive!! ^^

by **Dawn_Twilight** Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:45 am

o.o am I gonna have to write about Dusk being captured Very Happy

...o.o and I will most likely forget in the next 10 seconds

So, make sure he kicks someone through a wall, k?

by **Aardvark** Thu Dec 03, 2009 2:09 am

Much better Pto, and it's spelled Fierfek, it's a Mando'a all around curse. I'll post next, a general section for Pto and Sarus as well as a small section on Dusk and what's happening back at the Temple.

by **Ptolemy** Thu Dec 03, 2009 2:23 am

sure you heap all this praise then i post a sucky piece...

Hope i gave you a bit to work with

by **Thing** Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:02 am

Anything?

by **Ptolemy** Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:04 am

Patience Grasshopper

by **Thing** Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:06 am

Meh...

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:02 am

Oh, right, I forgot. I have it in my head, just not written, hopefully I can have it fully written by Wednesday morning.

by **Thing** Mon Dec 07, 2009 11:54 am

Must be a long one... That or you' re busy...

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:02 pm

i should write too, but i simply have no head lately. maybe near xmas ill be better.

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:43 pm

I'm doing three PoVs. Think between 3 and 4 pages.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:12 pm

dont do pov's
let me do pov's.

whats a pov?

edit: point of view. got it. let me do some pov's aard.

by **Aardvark** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:33 pm

I'm doing Dusk and Iron, as far as I know most of you prefer that I do the GMs PoV, but I could be wrong. And as far as Dusk goes, well I want to make another crazy section, give the character a bit more quality of derangement. The only other PoV I'm doing is my character, if you want to include some in your post Dray then go ahead.

by **Dray The Fingerless** Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:56 pm

YESH....ill let you post first, then ill proceed with a mega urkel upload.

by **Aardvark** Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:25 am

Did I say Wednesday morning? I meant Wednesday night. I have most of it done, now all I have to do is make Dusk's deal with the devil.

by **Ptolemy** Wed Dec 09, 2009 2:06 pm

I cannot wait to see it!!

by **Aardvark** Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:10 am

OK finished. There's one part in there that's no necessary to move the story, but it does give a glimpse into Dusk's twisted mind. It's a little graphic so I colored it Orange and put a warning at the beginning and end of the segment. If you don't want to take a chance just skip it.

by **Dawn_Twilight** Thu Dec 10, 2009 3:16 pm

Awesome Kami xD! Loved it Very Happy

Loved the blood too =o

Loved the ending Very Happy

by **Ptolemy** Thu Dec 10, 2009 4:00 pm

Very nice. definitely a better than what i had in mind.

You are getting better at this i think.

by **Dawn_Twilight** Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:51 pm

I think he's just happy to make some shit that is really f***ed up ^^

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