KOTOR (the character AKA ME!) Series: Chapter 1 Jedi Beginning
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KOTOR (the character AKA ME!) Series: Chapter 1 Jedi Beginning
once again it was just a normal day at the temple. thing, dawn and KOTOR were training furiously for the chance of being picked by a jedi master.
"so Dawn, who are you hoping to get?" asked KOTOR.
"hmmmmm said dawn i would love to have master arrdvaark"
"what about you KOTOR?" asked thing "who do you want as a master" Kotor thought for a moment and said "Master Reven."
"REVEN!?" said dawn shocked. "i cant belive you! do you know how good you have to be to get him? hes like the best of the best"
"I know."replied KOTOR "but he could teach me so much!"
"okay dawn lay off KOTOR, hes allowed to choose reven" replied thing "but KOTOR" he said in a low voice " hes a elite man you gotta be x10 better than all of us to get him"
KOTOR grinned. "heh guess i have to be X10 better" Thing retured the grin
the three then went off to the food hall talking and hoping and wondering who there masters will be.
THE NEXT DAY..
it was time. KOTOR woke up and got dressed ready for the trial day. "psst hey thing! get up lazy bones! its time for the trial date!" Thing grinned "yeah but im so gonna wup ur butt" KOTOR laughed "you will try" they both chuckled to each other. "goddamnit dawn!" replied a strained thing "GET UP and lay off the wampa burgers!" "*sigh* okay then thing im up im up!" "thing smiled "did you remember to grab your light saber from the training room?" "OH CRAP" shouted dawn "OMG OMG OMG Ill be right back!" dawn zipped out the room with the speed of a jawa chasing a runaway droid.
" ILL CATCH UP WITH YOU BOTHHHH" shouted dawn. the padawan's all gathered around Iron rat who was begining his speech on the trial behaviour and rules. "so with all of you here i will announce who you will fight. said iron rat Dawn will fight Xaviour Thing will fight Dray kury-so KOTOR will fight guthix and raven will fight daaaa.
ROUND 1
Kotor got ready for his duel with Guthix. The young padawan knew that guthix was a little hasty at times and hadent perfected his soresu so he decided to drop to a niman stance. he tied the blind fold around his head. he had to feel the force and see through the force.
BEGIN!
Kotor heard guthix's footsteps coming from the right he immediately droped to a soresu stance blocking guthix's red strike then parrying with a blue fan. Guthix was completely knocked back from the propulsion of the padawans fan guthix leaped over kotor and delivered a right strike close to the neck. kotor blocked and then used a sweep kick knocking guthix over and swung at his neck. "Winner Kotor, good try guthix." said iron rat
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I FEEL LIKE IT
"so Dawn, who are you hoping to get?" asked KOTOR.
"hmmmmm said dawn i would love to have master arrdvaark"
"what about you KOTOR?" asked thing "who do you want as a master" Kotor thought for a moment and said "Master Reven."
"REVEN!?" said dawn shocked. "i cant belive you! do you know how good you have to be to get him? hes like the best of the best"
"I know."replied KOTOR "but he could teach me so much!"
"okay dawn lay off KOTOR, hes allowed to choose reven" replied thing "but KOTOR" he said in a low voice " hes a elite man you gotta be x10 better than all of us to get him"
KOTOR grinned. "heh guess i have to be X10 better" Thing retured the grin
the three then went off to the food hall talking and hoping and wondering who there masters will be.
THE NEXT DAY..
it was time. KOTOR woke up and got dressed ready for the trial day. "psst hey thing! get up lazy bones! its time for the trial date!" Thing grinned "yeah but im so gonna wup ur butt" KOTOR laughed "you will try" they both chuckled to each other. "goddamnit dawn!" replied a strained thing "GET UP and lay off the wampa burgers!" "*sigh* okay then thing im up im up!" "thing smiled "did you remember to grab your light saber from the training room?" "OH CRAP" shouted dawn "OMG OMG OMG Ill be right back!" dawn zipped out the room with the speed of a jawa chasing a runaway droid.
" ILL CATCH UP WITH YOU BOTHHHH" shouted dawn. the padawan's all gathered around Iron rat who was begining his speech on the trial behaviour and rules. "so with all of you here i will announce who you will fight. said iron rat Dawn will fight Xaviour Thing will fight Dray kury-so KOTOR will fight guthix and raven will fight daaaa.
ROUND 1
Kotor got ready for his duel with Guthix. The young padawan knew that guthix was a little hasty at times and hadent perfected his soresu so he decided to drop to a niman stance. he tied the blind fold around his head. he had to feel the force and see through the force.
BEGIN!
Kotor heard guthix's footsteps coming from the right he immediately droped to a soresu stance blocking guthix's red strike then parrying with a blue fan. Guthix was completely knocked back from the propulsion of the padawans fan guthix leaped over kotor and delivered a right strike close to the neck. kotor blocked and then used a sweep kick knocking guthix over and swung at his neck. "Winner Kotor, good try guthix." said iron rat
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I FEEL LIKE IT
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Re: KOTOR (the character AKA ME!) Series: Chapter 1 Jedi Beginning
//Title edited for plagiarism.
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KOTOR, can I contribute 2 this?
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jason, you come in much later. you begin along with soul and daft punk much later
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I thought you wanted to do CoaJ, Jace...
Lol, you named it Beginning of a Jedi? NIce one Kotor. And thanks for adding me to your story, I like it. If anything, you could just try and set something up with the CoaJ team to be introduced in a sequel... No promises though.
Lol, you named it Beginning of a Jedi? NIce one Kotor. And thanks for adding me to your story, I like it. If anything, you could just try and set something up with the CoaJ team to be introduced in a sequel... No promises though.
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thanks thing just dont forget your in about 62 chapters of my life ,lol!
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thing944 wrote:I thought you wanted to do CoaJ, Jace...
Lol, you named it Beginning of a Jedi? NIce one Kotor. And thanks for adding me to your story, I like it. If anything, you could just try and set something up with the CoaJ team to be introduced in a sequel... No promises though.
meh, too long...
and i was gonna do jacens bro who...could be a grey paladin...
u no, sniper?
he gets killed in one of the episodes
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lol! crazy sith that gets blown up? or saint the jedi?
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we could always plagerize further and steal the evil alter ego to a jedi thing...Dawn would get pissed tho...
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Guthix is from runescape... jus change the name to O'siren Or something make ur own names Lolz
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thing944 wrote:I thought you wanted to do CoaJ, Jace...
yeah i am
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