Critisism needed.

In school I have started a smaller company where I work with Animation and Webdesign. For the school of course..
Then my teacher told me I needed a Picture that could be a kind of Signature.

It's called "Serenity Productions", and here's what I got this far:



(Picture may've been cut off somewhere cause of forums..)

What do you think about it? Constructive criticism is appreciated.


- Shin.

Sucks.......nah just kiddin

its nice, but blant....u should go outside the box dude.

I think you have a good start but a tip I would offer would be to base the design on your name. Serenity, would imply a serene and harmonic design in my opinion. One of the first things I was taught in a commercial art & graphic design class I took was that a logo's design shouldn't be overly complex or have a design unrelated to the company name.

You could do something like a shot of the sun rising behind the edge of the Earth. Let that scene be the main focus of the image then just do something clean but attractive with the "Serenity productions" text. You even could add a slogan below it something like "Harmony in design."

This picture is sort of what I had in mind but more like that shot from the end of one of the old Superman movies.



Maybe use some color enhancing techniques to make the image vibrant yet still clean. That would show off you're abilities as well without adding to much to cluster the image.

BIG thank you to all three!

This helped me a lot and I am still new at Design so this is perfect.

I'll keep all this in mind and look back many times, thanks a lot!

This is a big image but its an example of how you can alter the colors and have an image look great yet almost seem as if you did nothing.

This is just a wallpaper I downloaded but you're welcome to use it if you want.