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Post by Dray The Fingerless Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:32 pm

I am creating a section in both the Jedi and the Sith section of the website where players of JvS can submit some information and have an entry in that section! I require the following when you submit your character:

A quote from your character.

A picture which represents your character. Please try to avoid using known StarWars characters (like yoda for instance).

A short (or long its up to you) biography about your character.

Looking forward to expanding these pages to include all JvS members and thus truly leave your legacy in the clan!
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Post by Sqrl Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:54 am

Quote: I-I cant Control my........ no dont take my thoughts! NOOOOOOOOO!
Those were the words he said when Sqrl2k was brainwashed by "Bad Magic". Born in a Gigantic Tree on the planet Felucia, (squirrel joke here) Sqrl2k was very bright but lazy. He could manipulate objects without using his hands. his parents said he was gifted;but little did they know he was cursed. As he grew older he became more mature, giving people advice and morale during hard times.

But as more and more systems were being attacked by Darksiders, he realized what his true pupose was, to help survivors from being scared.
He then decided to join JvS in hoping he could make a difference.

But in all great heroes are some sins; He made the mistake of upsetting a Dark Shaman Priest called Tsu-San, it was through this he was turned into a Two-Faced demon. He became the shaman's puppet doing whatever the shaman desired. Sqrl2k has two different personalites that conflict inside him, He wishes through JvS he can get rid of his brainwashed mind and live like a true Jedi.

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Post by Dray The Fingerless Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:56 am

so....wich image do u want?
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Post by Sqrl Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:26 am

both they both are two sides of me lol
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Post by Shinobi Kenshi Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:26 am

"You give but little when you give of your possessions.
It is when you give of yourself that you truly give."

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Who said a Ninja couldn't be a Jedi?


Char story - Coming Soon.


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Post by Dray The Fingerless Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:18 pm

Sqrl2k/Voo Doo wrote:both they both are two sides of me lol

you have to choose one. get it?
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Post by Sqrl Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:48 pm

2nd one i guess
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:56 pm

kk thx
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Sat Oct 24, 2009 4:08 pm

Sqrl's story is posted in the site.
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Post by Champion Sat Oct 24, 2009 5:48 pm

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Post by Guthix Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:15 am

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"Balance is Power"

The star of the Korriban system blazed down upon the planet, scorching any who ventured outside. Darth Pravus stood on the brink of a doorway, leading to the catacombs where he would complete the trials of the sith. What remained of his sanity pleaded him not to enter, but that voice was only a whisper now. His Master beckoned, and they descended into the depths.

The chill of the tomb froze Pravus's bones, a chill surely impossible on such a blasted hot planet. While Pravus shivered, and his breath fogged, his Master seemed almost... strengthed, like he drew upon the power of the tombs.

They passed far below the surface of the planet, down and down into the endless maze, and Pravus knew that if not for the Master he would have become lost a long time ago. They reached a hall, with a circular door at its end. The door was surrounded by ancient sith symbols, and Pravus could not even begin to grasp their meaning. Lightning branched from the hands of his Master, a thin beam striking the heart of each symbol, from whence they ran back together, and met in the centre of the door, where was only the symbol "V". The V blazed with unholy lightning, and the door cracked down its middle, and swung inwards.

Darth Pravus beheld an awe inspiring sight, and he knew instantly that this was no trial, that he was here for another purpose. A room aeons old, with blazing torches on either side of the entrance, and directly ahead, an unspeakable sight. A writhing figure bound to a great slab of stone by the blade of an emerald green lightsaber, with little more then the hilt protruding from his chest, and yet he did not die. The man wore a dark black mask, and his body was reduced to little more then a skeleton. Pravus's Master drank in the sight, and began across the bridge to the man bound on the rock. Pravus heard the hums of a lightsabers and spun around. Three Jedi stood in the entrance to the chamber, two with blades of shimmering blue, one with a blade of brilliant topaz. "STOP! THE BEING HELD HERE WILL NOT BE RELEASED, NOT EVEN BY YOU!" the Master turned and saw the Jedi behind him, and scowled. "Do not meddle in affairs that do not concern you, fools." the Jedi of the topaz blade stepped forward, and said "The Jedi did not seal this menace away simply so you could free it millenia later. You will come with us, or die here." the Master contempleted them. "So be it... Jedi..." with that he ignited his crimson saber and leapt through the air towards the Jedi. Pravus stood, transfixed as he saw the four exchange blows at a lightning speed, with more talent then he had ever seen or would ever possess. He suddenly heard a voice inside his head, a voice that had once commanded respect, but was now weak, oh so weak. "Please.. please help me... Pravus turned to the figure on the rock to see it's Black Mask facing towards him, it's eyes, blazing with madness boring into his soul. "Look what they have done to me... please, please hurry..." Pravus started across the bridge towards the ancient Sith Lord. Meanwhile his Master was having difficulty with the Jedi. Though he was more then a match for the Jedi with their blue sabers, the topaz Jedi was on par with him, if not better. Changing tactics, the Master seized one blue saber wielding Jedi using the force, and smashed him into the wall with enough strength to endanger the whole tomb, killing the Jedi instantly. While the other two were distracted he plunged his saber into the other blue Jedi's skull, reuniting him with his comrade. The Topaz Jedi attacked using Djem-So, and roundhouse kicked the Master into the abyss under the bridge. The Jedi noticed what Pravus was doing, and sprinted to stop him.

Pravus stood but a metre from the Sith Lord when he heard the saber behind him. A blow from the Jedi swung towards his neck, only to be blocked at the last second by Pravus's Master, who had used the Force to save himself. The Master took advantage of the confusion to behead the Jedi, ending the conflict, although severly damaging Pravus's mindset. "Go on my Apprentice, pluck the saber from his chest, and Tulak Hord will lead the Sith to a new era of power. Pravus turned to his Master. "Why wait until now? Why hadn't you come here before?" "It is said Tulak could only be freed in the presence of Master and Apprentice, enemies of the Jedi both. Our coming here and slaughter of these Jedi fulfilled that prophecy, and now you must draw the saber from his chest." Pravus hesitated, then reached forward, and drew the emerald blade from the ancient sith lords chest. The Sith doubled over forwards, then stood tall, a being of great strength and power. "Good... yes... good... and now my new apprentice, we must repair the Rule of Darth Bane." the Master grinned. "Agreed." Tulak picked up the ancient Sith Sword that lay at his side, and the Master ignited his sith saber, and both swung at Pravus. Acting out of surprise Pravus ignited both his sith saber and the emerald one, using them to parry the dual blow, and realised immediatly what had happened. Now that Tulak was free there were 3 Sith Lords, while Banes rule dictated 2. Pravus stepped back onto the bridge, where only one could attack him at a time. The Master toyed with him, casually severing the Sith Saber, leaving Pravus with only the ancient emerald Jedi Saber. "Now my young apprentice, it is time for you to die. Remember what I taught you, only two, One to wield Power, One to crave it. Pravus stood tall, awaiting death and said "Then I am no Sith." At this moment years of darkness was lifted from him, and the old Guthix came forth. Guthix attacked the Master brutally with a deadly combination of Ataru and Djem-So, driving him back to the stone where Tulak had been held, where he engaged the Master in a saber lock, and impaled him with his own saber, which also became imbedded in the solid rock. The symbols in the rock flashed, and the Master screamed in pain as he was bound to its surface. Guthix heard a whistling blade, and spun to block Tulaks strike just in time. He charged the Sith, matching him by fuelling his attacks with the Light Side of the Force, until the Sith stood next to the Master. Guthix drew upon the force and sent all 3 of the sabers that belonged to the Jedi that attacked them hurtling towards Tulak. They speared him, impaling him thrice and sealing him to the rock that many times. The Sith Sword fell, and hurtled into the Abyss below. Guthix surveyed the two Sith, bound till the end of days on this rock in the depth of Korriban, then allowed the Force to guide him back to the surface, back to freedom, back to the light.
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:25 am

lol, davy jones...

and, did u just defeat a dark lord, plus an ancient dark lord, probably the greatest swordsman in Star Wars history?
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:49 am

posted on the site.
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Post by Camus Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:32 pm

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"Respect your enemy, but do not fear him. You are not alone."

The story of Hero is a very long one. Allow me to begin from day one. Hero played as a young, well noob frankly, named Obi. Obi had no idea how to fend for himself. Soon after his start, Obi met a young man named TheRigVeda. The two became very fast friends. They learned from each other. They taught each other. They improved by the day. They soon learned what a clan was and decided to take a shot at leading one. They named this group KTR. KTR was doomed to fail. Having never been in a clan before, Veda and Obi had no idea how to lead one. It lasted for about half a year or so before they decided to call it quits. They stayed together though and enjoyed each other's company. They fought together and got better and better through watching and learning and adapting. One day, Obi walked through the halls of SnJ. He liked what he saw. He joined them. It was here that he took up the name Hero. Veda followed him. Hero first met a man by the name of Knight in this clan, along with others such as IronRat, Kami, Spanish, Olek, ChosenOne, Kosmo, Haize, Serv, Muigi and many others. The two became friends as well. Here Hero became a Jedi Master. One day Hero decided SnJ wasn't for him though. He left. Veda and he talked and they took a shot at another clan called HMM. This clan was drastically better than KTR, however it still failed. It was during this time frame that Hero took up staffing and changed his name to TheWarHero. He also learned the ways of the force. He quickly became a terror with each. When HMM fell, Hero vanished. He was gone for a long time. He soon came back and learned about the split of SnJ. He quickly resided with SnJ. He had not seen or heard of his good friend in a very long time. He missed him. He had talked to Champion after rejoining SnJ and decided that he had joined the wrong side. He very swiftly switched to be with his old friends Knight, Iron, Kami, Spanish, and Olek again. He crossed paths with Veda for one final time and is unsure if he is to even see him again. Hero fights on in hopes that he shall, and is very happy to walk the halls of JvS this very day.
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:49 pm

so wait, is it hero or camus? ill go with Hero, since its whats in ur story.
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:02 pm

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Post by Dray The Fingerless Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:28 am

waiting on that story Shin.
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Post by Jacen Wed Dec 09, 2009 1:33 am

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"The only thing to fear is fear itself"

Jacen was one of the descendants of the Fel Empire. However, a Sith Assassin attacked him as a small child. Scared, he struck down the Sith and took his bloodred lightsaber and mysteriously imbued it with the lightsaber so it turned a bright cyan. His ancestor Jaina Solo gave him a secret force power, Arrow of Divine Light, that will turn any Sith it is used on to stone. He learned of the form Soresu, and its meaning, and devoted his life to defense, of himself, but also of the weak and poor. One day, he saw a Sith Assassin about to attack a man from behind. Frightened for the man, Jacen rushed forward and fired a divine arrow, turning the assassin to stone. The man turned around and introduced himself as YinYang. He offered to bring Jacen to a place of safety, which Jacen accepted. He was awed by the JvS temples high corridors. Yin saw this and offered to take Jacen as an apprentice. Jacen accepted, and made many friends there, such as KOTOR, Squirrel, Yin, Jas-Jas, Ameru, Ilmare, and many others.

Jacen woke up from his sleep and discovered a Dreadnought came, carrying thousands of assassin bugs. One presence, the queen, reached out to Jacen. It wanted to...duel him. He accepted, thinking he could drive them off by killing the queen. He got up, and the queen ran at him. He cartwheeled aside, and slashed at her carapace. He cut it open, but it healed and spewed out more tiny spiders that started to swarm Jacen. He heard a voice, that of Jaina Solo:

"Shatterpoint"

she said. He force hurled away the spiders, and saw the queen in a grid. All the lines made her abdomen seem solid red. He charged his lightsaber with force energy, and threw it. the chitin cracked wide open, and the queen died. Suddenly, the insects swarmed about, chewing each other. The image fizzed, and Jacen found himself being stared down by Hero. Then he grinned, and said:

"Welcome in, jedi knight"
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Post by Sqrl Fri Jan 08, 2010 9:21 pm

i wanna keep my story but i want to change my pic:

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and with these saber styles -
Ataru Sokan and Djem-So


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Post by Jacen Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:59 am

uhm...has mine been posted yet?

or do i need to be jk first?
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Post by Bulldog Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:46 am

This is so old... I don't think I ever ported my story over... Sad
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Post by Dray The Fingerless Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:05 pm

jacen story has been added. check the website.
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Post by Nihil Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:45 am

"Reflection may still be the last hope for society"

Humble beginnings often form the background of the most memorable heroes, but Nihil came from a middle class family, neither particularly wealthy or steeped in the throes of poverty. A force sensitive young boy, Nihil was acutely aware of his surroundings and often expounded upon the nuances of humanity and the fickleness of society. By chance, however, Nihil's life took an incredible change; a wandering merchant passing by Coruscant recognized Nihil's force capabilities, and besieged his parents with the possibility of taking him away from his suburban life and into the Jedi Temple. With much deliberation, his parents agreed to the Merchant's proposition, and bequeathed the rearing of their child to the Jedi.

As a person, it should be noted, Nihil was fairly emotionally and socially detached and few friendships did arise with other students at the temple, he was also renowned for his eccentricity. He spent most of his time in his quarters studying or continuing his sociological exposition that he had started in his early youth. Nihil made great strives in understanding the Unifying Force, specifically visions, and the living force.

His days today usually spend of study in the quarters of JVS, but he continues to set up in preparation for a more active role within the diplomatic and knight ranks.*

*My setup is still strange, and i'm thinking of changing to a joystick because of the lack of space and solid surfaces available.
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Post by KOTOR Fri Jul 09, 2010 12:02 am

*Cracks Knuckles* You want Original RP style or Quick and easy? Either way it'll go for a while.

'The Greatest Horror's in life, are those close to you.'

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Chapter 1, A warrior is Born.
A Very long time ago, in the distant village of Haikun, a Young Warrior was born. Blessed with the Power's of the force, the Youth Began his Training with the Great Master in the village, Lockholt. He and Lockholt, together went on many missions, all dangerous. One After noon as the Two began the Journey back to the Village, The youth smelt smoke, and Already a step ahead, Lockheart was sprinting to the village. They arrived to see the men and women franticly Batting out the flames on thier village. imediatly the two fought the flames with the villagers. The flame defeated and houses rebuilt the villagers slept, but unknown to them, was the beginning of a Horrid future, on the small planet of Dantooine..

Chapter 2 The Silent Village.
In the Dead of night, they come. The creatures or beasts of dantooine. the hunters, mercenarys and worst of all, Dark jedi. The town was not burnt like last time. Just swiftly delt with. they came to the village quarters, killing every man women and child. They pressed on, having a quick fight with master Lockholt before he succumbined to thier crimson blades. All of them, but one. The youth lay there in his bed. He sensed his masters peril and ran out of his quarters, only to be hit in the head with the back of a lightsaber hilt. as he succumbined to the darkness of conciousness, he heard the words of a man. "This one is not ready to die, His purpose shall be soon. he shall find iumself at ends against the universe, and i will come and take him as mine." as he heard these words, his vision became blurry, and he began to drift to sleep.

Chapter 3 The Road to Hate.
As the youth awoke, he found himsefl, the only survivor of the silent and swift attack on the village. they had killed his master, his family, the boy was only 12. He felt a deep burning hate in him, he did not stop it as his master taught him to, He fed on it, Brooding his revenge, he saddled up, grabbing only what he needed. and, his masters Green Lightsaber. He set out across the plains of Dantooine, he searched the planet from every corner, every inch with no sign of the attackers. he was fed up by now, with the hate he felt, he pursued the reports of a jedi enclave starting up on dantooine.

Chapter 4 The Enclave.
The youth once with the jedi, was taught much more than his master had, he learnt how to heal, sense, speed and protect. he became a very much valued padawan he then weas apprenticed to a Man with expierence in the field of battle against sith, Master Greyback. He and Grey back headed to the outer rim territories searching for the mercenarys who killed his village. they found them, defeated them, and a dark jedi killed his master. Once again the youth felt Hate, stirking down the jedi when his back was turned. The council granted him knight when he had finished his trials. he set off, with his new saber, Master Lockhearts Saber, and now, Master Greyback's. He searched far and wide, finally fiding the rest of the merc clan. brutuly killing them. He began searching for the Dark Jedi now,as they searched for him. Eventually, the Dark jedi got the better of him, Knocking him out.
As the Youth awoke, he found himself in a Dark room, full of rock, granite and sith objects. 5 Dark jedi where on either side of him, Blocking his way to reaching for his saber. The Granite Door opened, unleashing the light on the youth's face. Korriban. he knew where he was. As the shadowy figure walked in, his Voice, full of silky danger spoke, "welcome Aretaz. We have been awaiting your arrival."

Chapter 5 The Shadows of Korriban.
The Knight, Looked into the Great big, yellow eyes of the man who killed his village, with hate, with anger. and something inside him craved this person. He did not understand what or who, but in time, he would... as the Shadowy Dark Jedi began to twist the Knight, day after day of the torture, he began to succum. He was told by his "new master" that Aretaz was his true name, he was born on Korriban, and taken away from the sith by the jedi that became his master. He learned that the voice in him, was of a Dark brood, waiting to be hatched, to take over the Knights Soul and become the weapon the sith needed. As time went by, The sith ost the connection with the Knight. He Ran from the acdemy. and was stopped by many sith, as taught by his new master, he struck without mercy, defeating them all and running to a fighter of the sith's.

Chapter 6 The Return Home.
As the sith Fighter landed on the surface of dantooine he greeted his friends and Council members as he began his Testing period to become a Jedi Consulor. he trained hard, and fast preparing for every possibility, he continued training for 4 months before taking a breather and returning to study the jedi ways. as this happened, once again the force inside him, giving him a pain so horrible no one coud descirbe, was starting again. the feelings, drove him away from guiadance. in solitude, he fought this demon inside him, losing every second. Aretaz was hatching.

Chapter 7 The Darkest of Shadows.
As the Knight fought this demon he became much less human, his skin becoming pale, his hands becoming clawed, he returned to the temple, seeking the masters advice, they told him to head to taspir with 19 knights. As they head to Taspir, the pain started again, The Knights Body Began to float away, and a dark, Brooding body formed, his eyes became dead yellow. and his face became dark grey, Aretaz had taken over him. as he fought this new self, the council ordered the knights to attack. many of them died, they continued fighting this, beast.and as The knight felt the last stages of humanity, his master's appeared, Greyback, and Lockheart, telling him to fight at the monster within, that no matter what connection was between him and this beast, that he was stronger. he fought back, regaining some flesh, until he helped the Knights destroy the creature within. as The man lay there, Dying from the disconnection of his body, the council members began to put him back together. it Took 5 years to fully grow back, and he Knight took away the name, Aretaz. being a Knight of the old republic, he renamed himself, KOTOR's trials as a Jedi Knight, had begun.


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Sabers: Staff,single
Style: shi cho,makashi
Lightsabers: 3. 2 can be joined to create a staff. his own saber is Blue and his others are green.


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Post by Dray The Fingerless Fri Jul 09, 2010 1:03 am

oh shit, i have to work now....uh lets see how do you edit this website...
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