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Post by Jacen on Thu Dec 03, 2009 12:20 am

Yeah...It's like a side-story to CoaJ. I'll start it off.

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Camus looked around the room. The holding cells were simply made of bars, made of Mando iron. The Sith'Ari, Layfon, was there too. The room and cells were dark. Their guide to the science branch of the current government (Their academy was slightly out of touch with political events), a Jedi Watchman, walked forward. Suddenly, a growl ripped forth from a throat, and a melted face with no nose appeard. The skin on half his face was gone, his left eye was rolled up in the back of his head, and black fungi covered his scalp, which had a great rip down the middle. It crashed into the gates. The watchman gestured and the thing flew back to the wall.
"What the hell is that?" Lay asked
"A scientific miracle. We recovered a dead body and rejuvenated it. However, the serum is highly contagious and disfigures your appearance. We need a sample of the persons DNA to perfectly replicate them." The scientist explained.
"Hmmm..."Camus thought " They look a bit like...zombies."
"In theory, they are." The man responded. His comlink buzzed just a young padawan of JvS raced in. Static came from his comlink. The padawan, Jacen, was white as a ghost and shuddering all over.
"Control, Jacen, control" Camus urged soothingly.
"R-right. Sir, the main holding cell has been breached."
The scientist suddenly paled. "W-what!?"
Jacen pointed as he activated his cyan lightsaber.
Lay and Camus slowly turned. The monster was sinking its teeth into the scientist's jugular vein. Blood was spurting out, and the scientists mouth was opened in a silent scream. The monster had somehow escaped.
Camus looked at Lay. "Oh, shit" they both said.
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Post by Jacen on Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:10 am

Camus reached for his lightsaber, but found nothing. Lay was quicker to realize this, and launched a lightning storm at the zombie. It hit it and knocked it backwards, but it rose.
"What the-" Lay said. "You probably have to decapitate it" said Camus. "Jacen, you want to?" he asked.
Jacen nodded, and flipped forward. The zombie looked up as the cyan blade passed through its neck.
"Why don't we have our lightsabers?" Lay asked.
"Confiscated. Me, Ameru, Starscream, and Jas-Jas were in charge of the Mamita so we still have ours.
"Wait, so the main holding cells have been breached?" Camus asked again.
"Yes. Everyone else is there. The other padawans are there, assissting the other Jedi and Sith."
The other Jedi and Sith were Bulldog, Peppa, Aragorn, Luke, YinYang, Sqrl2k, Dray, Span, and Xzav. The rest were in the Dreadnaught carrier orbiting the planet wearing the JvS logo and the words shadows of the force stenciled on the side.

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Aragorn swore violently as alarm klaxons sounded and cages were opened. Their guide was lying in a pool of blood further away. Aragorn recalled his lightsaber and decapitated the nearest zombie. Blaster bolts streaked out from around him. 2 zombies jumped on Yin, who promptly shot their heads off. It seemed they had discovered a weapons locker. Finally, the hallway was empty, save for blood, gore, and quite a few bodies.
"Casualties?" Span and Bulldog barked at the same time.
"None" the others said. The doors opened, and three padawans stepped through, lightsabers ignited.
"Aw, we missed it..."Ameru groaned. "Nope!" Jas yelled, spinning and decapitating two more. The padawans flew into the enemy, destroying every single one.
"Guys?" A voice rasped from behind them. Aragorn whirled around, stared into the zombie's eyes, and gasped.
"Kami?"


//dRAY: Edited for plagiarism purposes. i dont want teh Chikita being used anywhere eelse then the Jedi Trilogy.
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Re: JvS horror story

Post by Guest on Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:05 am

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Re: JvS horror story

Post by Jacen on Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:45 pm

anyone else gonna post? its a collaborative effort, like coaj
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Post by Nihil on Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:46 pm

uh, ppl are devoting their efforts to coaj right now, i'd wait.
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Re: JvS horror story

Post by Jacen on Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:57 pm

i no...this'll still be here...for nostalgia reasons...etc.
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Re: JvS horror story

Post by YinYang on Fri Jan 15, 2010 4:38 am

omg i was in one of these!!!!!!

honestly i have never even been mentioned in any of these things!!!!

ALL RIGHT!!!!

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Post by Thing on Fri Jan 15, 2010 5:58 am

I think you were mentioned in one of the oaJ's...

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Re: JvS horror story

Post by Aardvark on Fri Jan 15, 2010 6:58 am

No people mentioned in oaJ, that aren't main characters, are: Anteril, Ares, ArcWolf, Bazariel, Behalok, BgFighter, Border09, Camus, Champion, Daaaaa, Drist, Gal3rm, Guthix, Hrothgar, Jacob, Layfon, Muigi, Neliel, Nihil, Nomad, Peppa, Raiden, RsG, Servilous, Sinestra, Siris, SoulCast, Stamp, Wolfyx, Zawisza, and Zohan.

Main characters are: Aragorn, Dawn, Dray, Iron, Kami, Spanish, Sarus, Thing, and Xzavier

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Post by Aragorn on Fri Jan 15, 2010 7:04 am

how the bloody heck he remembers this, I have no idea...

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Post by Aardvark on Fri Jan 15, 2010 7:13 am

Easy, I wrote most of the character introductions.

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Post by Disturbed on Fri Jan 15, 2010 8:19 am

oh lol. Btw, I'll add to this k jac?

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Re: JvS horror story

Post by Jacen on Fri Jan 15, 2010 1:17 pm

ya thats fine...same rules as coaj. except im in charge

shud i start a coordination topic for this...?
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Post by Jacen on Fri Jan 15, 2010 8:41 pm

nvm already did...ilmare, post there for ideas...u 2 yin, and any1 else whos interested in writing...this is like coaj and is a sidestory to it, so....any1 whos in coaj can post here 2
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Post by Nihil on Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:16 pm

i think i've only been mentioned once, LOL! then some how i died, which just goes to show how loosely connected, if not at all, some of these things are, you guys really need to go back and edit some of these oaj's, it gets confusing.

i also like to complain about other ppls achievements, when i have none of my own in the same matter ^^
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Post by Jacen on Fri Jan 15, 2010 11:13 pm

GUYS OT POST THIS SHIT IN THE COLLABORATION THREAD THIS IS JUST FOR THE STORRYYYYYYYY!
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Re: JvS horror story

Post by BaStUn on Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:55 am

Horror Twisted Evil affraid
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Post by Aureus on Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:55 pm

Can we stop necro'ing with useless posts plz. It's annoyinmg checking a thread just for ur smiley spam

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Post by Aardvark on Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:32 pm

Infraction: Bastun - Spamming.

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Post by BaStUn on Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:39 pm

?
Sorry, but I don't think thats spamming anyway >.<
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Post by Aardvark on Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:46 pm

It has nothing to do with the topic and you've done this with 5+ threads. It's spam.

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Post by BaStUn on Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:50 pm

Then I'm sorry
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