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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Ptolemy on Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:11 am

the end of mine was rushed a bit.

I was winding down... could have waited to post i guess

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:21 am

It was fine just the whole thing was a little fast. Novel time that sequence of events would be at least 30 pages.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Ptolemy on Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:23 am

well maybe..

I think that Ptolemy was in a hurry to find his Son. there could have been more i guess... mainly in the last 2 - 3 paragraphs.

Want me to embellish? I probly could. would take me longer than a couple of days tho

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by tRibaL on Wed Sep 08, 2010 12:48 am

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Dray The Fingerless on Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:54 am

was gonna work on it today but had something happen. will do it tomorrow.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Dray The Fingerless on Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:34 pm

posted. Aard i need planning of how to take down a spy in a ship, or you really wanna go offship? and onto a planet?

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Ptolemy on Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:48 pm

what about feeding it false information? and it should take a little time to track... I think it should get away... not scott free by escape should be in the cards...

What do you think?

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Dray The Fingerless on Wed Sep 08, 2010 3:05 pm

Aard and i had a rough sketch on what to do, but heçs the spy, not me. I just pilot and shoot, and tell people what to shoot

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Thing on Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:25 pm

I have a few things to say.


1) It's spelled Grin, Dray. Grim means something entirely different.

2) Even though you are right about Droids not having any force energy, Jedi usually sensed them because of the energy flowing through them. So, you might wanna explain why you aren't using that technique, like maybe, there are too may Droids working around on the ship to accurately tell the difference, or maybe just change it to the fact you are searching for energy flowing through a seemingly looking Human.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Dray The Fingerless on Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:45 pm

1. n is next to the m in my keyboard. sorry i have big fingers, wich i use to strangle people like you.

2. bullshit. they felt energy, but they needed meditation for such things. they felt movement. thats called kinectic energy. they felt a leaf falling from a tree. but this is a crowded ship so they have to use focused concentration, not environmental one. ill simplify it for you. they cant probe evth at the same time, they have to probe one thing at a time. if they use environmental one, they cant identify individual droids like you can do with humans. they cna simply feel energy and movement, the way you can hear wind outside your window. thus, even if they feel energy flowing, it might not even be a droid, and if its a droid there s no telling its the right one unless they verify it visually. bottom line, no, jedi did not usually sense droids. the key word being USUALLY. a starship full people, droids and technology is impossible for 'energy sensing'. stfu and gtfo

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Thing on Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:49 pm

I meant that if they were looking for droids, that's what they would usually look for. And yeah, there is a lot of stuff with energy, but fuck you.


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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:16 pm

Dray is correct. Unless a Jedi had a special affinity for mechanics it was very difficult to sense a droid or any technology for that matter. And being on a ship only makes this more pronounced because you are essentially looking for an absence, a hole where you should sense life but there is none. And we're not pulling an NJO and have them magically able to do such a complex technique on the run.

As for the takedown. Ship to ship is possible, you'd just spring a trap, or hell even dog fight. Planet is more likely though.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Thing on Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:50 am

Oh...


I was thinking that Ben wasn't the one of few who could sense droids in the force. I thought many could do it...


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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Fri Sep 10, 2010 11:10 pm

I'll do something next, will take a couple days because it'll be 5 or more pages most likely.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Dray The Fingerless on Fri Sep 10, 2010 11:22 pm

Jeez, i said do what you want, i didnt mean to write the whole story on one sip.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Fri Sep 10, 2010 11:24 pm

5 pages = plan, chase, get on ship. But in this case it needs to include multiple perspectives to paint the right picture meaning I need to show what's happening from Sarus', Dray's, Thing's, & Jax's point of view.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:35 pm

Cut it short, and it's kinda half-assed, couldn't get into writing it.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by tRibaL on Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:00 am

ill get on my segment in the next week when i have time and a inspiration to write
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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Ptolemy on Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:50 am

what are the odds of the Treader having docked in that bay and Pto and Ara helping out?

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Mon Sep 20, 2010 11:24 am

None seeing as this takes place days later and on an entirely different ship from the Balance.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Ptolemy on Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:05 pm

Well crap... ahh well

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:14 pm

I'm thinking we should have diverging paths this time. Character interaction is all well and good, but the main characters end up on the same ship too often. Would be better to isolate them in small groups for a while. I mean it's a war, there's no shortage of problems to solve.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Ptolemy on Mon Sep 20, 2010 1:20 pm

Well i am heading back to the Balance with 2 turned jedi and Ara (Indanger of being turned) or should i head back to JvS? not sure i wouls WANT to go back there.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Dray The Fingerless on Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:15 pm

The droid is mine old man. GET YOUR OWN.

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Re: DoaJ Coordination thread

Post by Aardvark on Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:19 pm

Pto and I have figured out something that he and Ara can do.

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